You have an nice art direction going but I think you're a bit too influenced by Egoraptor. I hate to say it, cause people always say it. I feel it's obvious in this case, though. Because the puns, the style of voice acting and animation has a really close resemblance to Egoraptor.
I would also suggest that you put some more effort into the actual animation than just doing keyframes.
Good point made though. I can relate to that. The flash just wasn't coming from a genuine place.